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  • View author's info Author Posted on Jan 11, 2007 at 06:37 PM


    6 years coming up it would have been
    Yet this was a love even true love couldn't win.
    Love that seemed so real , so true
    Everyday you awoke saying I love you!
    We were blessed with nothing, but love
    Thanking, the Lord for our blessings above.
    Then something changed an we grew apart
    Now everytime i hear your name, I feel as though I lost apart of my heart.
    We let people who didn't have what we had keep us from being together
    Yet, we thought we were strong enough for all types of weather.
    During the storms we lost apart of ourself
    Not realizing our love was our wealth.
    Who was it that said love was enough
    I swear they must was playing poker and called our bluff
    I know now they must have lied
    'Cause every since you've been gone I've cried.
    I don't want to think about where we could be, cause in reality
    I just want what's best for you and me!

    For true, yet lost love;
    Patrice copyright 1.11.07

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  • View author's info Posted on Jul 20, 2007 at 07:56 AM


    very well written
  • View author's info Posted on May 15, 2007 at 11:44 PM


    That was a beautifully written poem. Thank You for sharing it! :)
  • View author's info Posted on Feb 21, 2007 at 06:50 AM


    I just read your poem and I have to admit that anyone who has ever truely been thru that would have felt the pain one more time reading this. I definitely took a deep breath.
  • View author's info Posted on Feb 08, 2007 at 07:16 AM


    Good job on this one. I can feel the heartache leaping off the page at me. That kind of poetry is powerful. Keep up the good work.
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