(poem) Just This One Time Romance Forward to friends

  • View author's info Author Posted on Oct 03, 2005 at 06:49 AM


    Just This One Time


    Sometimes I find myself just staring into empty space
    fantasizing and thinking about you nearly all the time
    visions of you and I together, having so much fun
    hypnotized by your beautiful smile and your beautiful eyes

    I sometimes fantasize about being all alone with you
    but whenever I get close to you I begin to perspire every time
    I get so excited but so nervous, just from the very sight of you
    that my heart begins to beat faster, more than a thousand times

    Sometimes I wonder what it would be like just to kiss your lips
    and to feel your heart beat as your body presses up against mine
    would I be able to catch my breath at that very moment
    could I handle such pleasure & excitement, just this one time

    I often imagine just you & I, walking on the edges of a beach
    walking under the moon light as water splashes upon our feet
    walking in the cool night air, leaving our foot prints in the sand
    enjoying every little moment with you, nothing could ever be so sweet

    The moon sits high in the sky but yet it dances on the water for us
    the reflections of the dancing moon casts an image in your eyes
    and at that very moment I feel invincible but yet so vulnerable & weak
    when I look at you, I just want to hold you, kiss you & touch you
    Just this one time
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  • View author's info Posted on Feb 20, 2006 at 02:33 PM


    that is very lovely poem
  • View author's info Posted on Dec 21, 2005 at 08:05 AM


    OneSexyGaBoy write:
    Just This One Time


    Sometimes I find myself just staring into empty space
    fantasizing and thinking about you nearly all the time
    visions of you and I together, having so much fun
    hypnotized by your beautiful smile and your beautiful eyes

    I sometimes fantasize about being all alone with you
    but whenever I get close to you I begin to perspire every time
    I get so excited but so nervous, just from the very sight of you
    that my heart begins to beat faster, more than a thousand times

    Sometimes I wonder what it would be like just to kiss your lips
    and to feel your heart beat as your body presses up against mine
    would I be able to catch my breath at that very moment
    could I handle such pleasure & excitement, just this one time

    I often imagine just you & I, walking on the edges of a beach
    walking under the moon light as water splashes upon our feet
    walking in the cool night air, leaving our foot prints in the sand
    enjoying every little moment with you, nothing could ever be so sweet

    The moon sits high in the sky but yet it dances on the water for us
    the reflections of the dancing moon casts an image in your eyes
    and at that very moment I feel invincible but yet so vulnerable & weak
    when I look at you, I just want to hold you, kiss you & touch you
    Just this one time


    wow, you put into words what we all feel at one time or another. thank you so much for sharing your beautiful writing.
  • View author's info Posted on Nov 20, 2005 at 07:28 AM


    Angel of Mercy

    There he sat with knife in hand.
    Just wanting to go to the promised land.
    Sitting there just waiting to die.
    A broken heart the reason why.

    Now it's nearly time to go.
    For he had never felt so low.
    When a little angel did appear.
    And told him that she loved him so.

    And as his tears began to flow.
    He realized he didn't want to go.
    He took the knife and threw it down.
    His life saved by an angel who cared.
  • View author's info Posted on Nov 20, 2005 at 07:04 AM


    Just wanted to share my thoughts with you.
    You Intoxify My Soul

    As I look around all I can see is grey skies.
    Then I catch a glimpse of you through my eyes.
    You made my darkened world feel whole.
    You found the innermost part of my soul.

    That glimpse of you that you did impart.
    Began to touch my aching heart.
    I just hope I can do the same for you.
    For in my soul you brightly burn.

    Within my heart you grew and grew.
    I only wished that you knew.
    You filled my soul with desire.
    You turned my darkest night to day.
    And gave me blue skies instead of grey
    You light my world and intoxified my soul.
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 23, 2005 at 04:55 PM


    Well JD....If I knew how to reach you ...I just might share some of my most personal stuff with you. :)

    You could always write a short acrostic here to let me know. OR I will do the same for you. Too tired tonight to get to it as I worked 14 hour days all weekend (Friday too) training other fitness instructors and I am BEAT!
    Nice to see you on this thread. :) Hope you are well.
    Vycki
    Well JD....If I knew how to reach you ...I just might share some of my most personal stuff with you. :)

    You could always write a short acrostic here to let me know. OR I will do the same for you. Too tired tonight to get to it as I worked 14 hour days all weekend (Friday too) training other fitness instructors and I am BEAT!
    Nice to see you on this thread. :) Hope you are well.
    Vycki
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 21, 2005 at 02:33 AM


    Waterlady - when you mention about personal I have a few thoughts. I'm not sure if you have read much Hemingway. But his thoughts are not to avoid the personal side but to be 100% true. His thoughts are that if you are true and don't avoid all the pain - that you will be able to write true about the subject.

    I can not say his is the only style. But writing true has such an appeal to me.
    Waterlady - when you mention about personal I have a few thoughts. I'm not sure if you have read much Hemingway. But his thoughts are not to avoid the personal side but to be 100% true. His thoughts are that if you are true and don't avoid all the pain - that you will be able to write true about the subject.

    I can not say his is the only style. But writing true has such an appeal to me.
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 20, 2005 at 10:11 PM


    Nope not published....I'm at a stage where, for the most part, they are too personal to me to want to be shared with the entire world.

    Those ones are the first time I have shown anyone other than a close friend. I haven't shared too many more of the hundreds.

    As for the right direction. The first place to start is to get them all typed up in a professional presentation. If you can...get it bound somehow to make it more real and start sending copies to publishing houses. Chances are you will ecperience some rejection.....but volume will guarantee eventual success. I would also try to enter as many poetry contests that you know of (that are legitimate and cost free) get some awards to brag about. Try sending some in to your local paper and suggesting a poetry corner and that you would love to take care of that column....there are many more ideas but that should get you going my friend. :)
    Nope not published....I'm at a stage where, for the most part, they are too personal to me to want to be shared with the entire world.

    Those ones are the first time I have shown anyone other than a close friend. I haven't shared too many more of the hundreds.

    As for the right direction. The first place to start is to get them all typed up in a professional presentation. If you can...get it bound somehow to make it more real and start sending copies to publishing houses. Chances are you will ecperience some rejection.....but volume will guarantee eventual success. I would also try to enter as many poetry contests that you know of (that are legitimate and cost free) get some awards to brag about. Try sending some in to your local paper and suggesting a poetry corner and that you would love to take care of that column....there are many more ideas but that should get you going my friend. :)
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 19, 2005 at 05:19 AM


    So miss WaterLady have you gotten any of your poems published? I'm looking to do a book myself! Just having problems getting started in the right direction..
    So miss WaterLady have you gotten any of your poems published? I'm looking to do a book myself! Just having problems getting started in the right direction..
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 06, 2005 at 06:56 AM


    Your poems are deeply touching and very heartfelt...you can sense the passion of your feelings and almost feel the intesity of the emotions. Outstanding!

    THIS is precisely the kind of communication that makes me want to know MORE about a man. :)
  • View author's info Posted on Oct 04, 2005 at 06:22 PM


    Thank you and I am very pleased to know that you liked it. I have another one posted, read it and tell me what you think of it as well.
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